
IB Extended Essay: Drafting & Redrafting Tips
Master the IB Extended Essay drafting process with expert tips on writing, editing, and refining your work. Learn how to turn your first draft into a top-scoring essay.
Why Lanterna?
While there is no fixed rule, most successful students produce at least three distinct versions: a rough draft to get ideas down, a complete draft for supervisor feedback, and a final polished version. The "redrafting" phase is where you refine your arguments, improve flow, and ensure you are strictly meeting the assessment criteria.
Your school supervisor is permitted to comment on one full draft of your Extended Essay. This is a critical moment in the process. They cannot edit your work for you, but they will give feedback on structure, argument strength, and analysis. It is essential to have a complete, well-formatted draft ready for them to maximize the value of this feedback.
If you are over the 4,000-word limit, focus on removing descriptive sections and retaining analytical ones. Ask yourself if every sentence directly helps answer your Research Question. Redrafting is often about being concise; remove "fluff," simplify complex sentences, and ensure your introduction and conclusion are punchy and focused.
We strictly adhere to IB academic honesty guidelines, so we cannot write the essay for you. However, our tutors—who have all scored highly in the IB—act as expert mentors. They can help you brainstorm research questions, structure your arguments, understand the specific subject criteria, and stay organized throughout the drafting process to reduce stress.
Our free consultation is a 20–30 minute session with a Student Success Expert. It is a chance to discuss your current academic situation, Extended Essay progress, and goals. There is no obligation to purchase tutoring; you will leave the call with a clear plan, priorities, and actionable next steps tailored to your needs.
Yes, we have a vast network of top-tier tutors covering almost all IB subjects at both HL and SL. whether you are writing your EE in History, Biology, English Literature, or a less common subject, we can match you with a tutor who knows exactly what examiners are looking for in that specific field.
Writer’s block is common during the EE process. A Lanterna tutor can help you break down the essay into manageable chunks, create a realistic timeline, and talk through your ideas to get the flow moving again. Sometimes, just having an experienced sounding board is enough to turn a blank page into a solid first draft.
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